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change of kimono:
showing only her back
to the blossom's fragance
花の香に
うしろ見せてや
更衣
hana no ka ni
ushiro misete ya
koromagae
moonflowers—
the beauty
of hidden things
ゆふがほや
物のかくれて
うつくしき
yūgao ya
mono no kakurete
utsukushiki
Note: The moonflower blooms in the dark, unfolding its whiteness faintly at first and then more so as the night darkens.
mosquito-net grass
also hangs
at the flower shrine
蚊帳つりの
草もさげてや
花御堂
kayatsuri no
kusa mo sagete ya
hanamidō
Note: The flower shrine is used for the Hanamatsuri (Flower Festival) to commemorate Buddha's birthday on April eighth. Cherry blossoms and other seasonal flowers are usually used rather than mosquito-net grass, a common weed, to adorn the roof of the enshrined Buddha statue. Another haiku of humility:
ひとすじに 百合はうつむく ばかり也
hitosuji ni yuri wa utsumuku bakari nari
the one true path / for the lily / is just to bow her head

