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Okay, seriously. What the heck is Inara? Is she a god?

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Wait, that's it? Huh...
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— 2 hours, 56 min ago

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Revenge!

— 10 hours, 48 min ago

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Slightly cringe dialogue moment and rushed romance. Ugh.

— Feb 12, 2026 01:32PM

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So another god bound Skedi and Inara together?

— Feb 12, 2026 05:27AM

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I think out of all the POVs so far, Elo is the weakest. He isn't uninteresting, just I don't get a lot from him in comparison.

— Feb 11, 2026 01:36PM

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They're finally at Belnraden.

— Feb 11, 2026 10:08AM

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Oh, so Elo was cursed the whole time.

— Feb 11, 2026 05:10AM

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You went too far, Skedi.

— Feb 09, 2026 01:34PM

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While the prose is not bad, there's a lot of filter verbs and moments of telling where sensory details could've strengthen it.

— Feb 09, 2026 05:36AM

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I do wonder if Skedi is one of the gods who survived the war and got diminutive/reincarnated as another god.

— Feb 06, 2026 01:33PM

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