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Nicholas Perez is on page 16 of 304

Pretty good pacing so far! Did I get lucky twice and have two fast -paced books? We shall see.

— Feb 03, 2026 01:38PM

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Nicholas Perez is finished

Wait, that's it? Huh...
RTC

— Feb 13, 2026 01:10PM

Nicholas Perez is on page 287 of 304

Okay, seriously. What the heck is Inara? Is she a god?

— Feb 13, 2026 10:08AM

Nicholas Perez is on page 278 of 304

Revenge!

— Feb 13, 2026 05:19AM

Nicholas Perez is on page 251 of 304

Slightly cringe dialogue moment and rushed romance. Ugh.

— Feb 12, 2026 01:32PM

Nicholas Perez is on page 241 of 304

So another god bound Skedi and Inara together?

— Feb 12, 2026 05:27AM

Nicholas Perez is on page 222 of 304

I think out of all the POVs so far, Elo is the weakest. He isn't uninteresting, just I don't get a lot from him in comparison.

— Feb 11, 2026 01:36PM

Nicholas Perez is on page 211 of 304

They're finally at Belnraden.

— Feb 11, 2026 10:08AM

Nicholas Perez is on page 197 of 304

Oh, so Elo was cursed the whole time.

— Feb 11, 2026 05:10AM

Nicholas Perez is on page 174 of 304

You went too far, Skedi.

— Feb 09, 2026 01:34PM

Nicholas Perez is on page 163 of 304

While the prose is not bad, there's a lot of filter verbs and moments of telling where sensory details could've strengthen it.

— Feb 09, 2026 05:36AM

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